3d genesis smg

so this is another 3d version of a gun i designed, first this i made it it was pretty rubbish, i had no idea how to make it but from shapes, then i used the 'plane' way where it came out like this and was much easier, still not rendered the way i picture it, the picture perfect way but im still a noob at 3d work, lighting and such is tricky, i'd rather colour it and textures and such on photoshop.

3Ds max
mental ray

Edit: okay well this has even turned out pretty bad, time to edit..